I can see what you mean Greg , but keep in mind the fact that there is no chorus, just a tune. As with all of my songs, I have sung this to myself many times, and I worked this out to be a little over 5 minutes.
Greg (2003/09/18 04:15:36)
Too many words.
This would be a 15 min song.
Needs to be cut down to about 1/3 the length
This song is written to the tune of Sting - Fields Of Gold. It's about accepting things that have happened in the past and learning the lesson from it.